PSLE 2011年命题作文：《这一天对我来说很特别》
范文与练习
常见离题误区
- 着重在“一天”，而不是“一件事”
中文：作文题目强调“一天”，所以故事必须在同一天内完成。如果写成一件事却横跨好几天，就会离题。
English: The focus is on “a day,” not just “an event.” The entire story should happen within a single day. If the event spans several days, it will go off-topic. - 没有写出“特别之处”
中文：不能只写“今天是我的生日，所以特别”。必须写清楚为什么这个生日特别，例如：朋友们给我惊喜、有人恶作剧、收到一份意想不到的礼物。
English: You can’t just say “It was my birthday, so it was special.” You must explain what made it special — for example, friends threw a surprise, someone played a prank, or you received an unexpected gift.
写作提示
- 例子1：生日的特别之处
中文：同学们突然唱生日歌，结果蛋糕被人不小心弄翻了，全班一片混乱，但也成为一段难忘的回忆。
English: Friends suddenly sang a birthday song, but someone accidentally dropped the cake. The chaos turned into an unforgettable memory. - 例子2：比赛的难忘时刻
中文：在运动会那天，本来快要输掉比赛，却因为大家齐心协力，奇迹般反败为胜。
English: On Sports Day, the team was about to lose, but with teamwork, they made a surprising comeback. - 例子3：突发意外
中文：那天和家人去郊游，却迷路了，最后在陌生人帮助下回到营地，这让人特别难忘。
English: Went on a family picnic but got lost, only to be guided back by a kind stranger — making the day unforgettable. - 例子4：舞台经历
中文：第一次上台表演，虽然紧张到出错，但观众的掌声让我体会到“特别”的意义。
English: First time performing on stage, made mistakes due to nerves, but the applause made it truly special.
总结：写这道作文时要牢牢记住 “一天” + “特别的原因” 两个元素。事件必须在一天内完成，并且说明为什么那一天让你至今难忘。
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